Stood in the middle of a forest, the rain trickling down my face and
back, my soaking T-shirt stuck to my shivering skin, the frosty bite of
the wind nipping at my flesh. I think of what the weather was like only a
few moments ago, bright, sunny and warm. I look down at my soggy
shorts, knowing that I should have known that the nice English weather
would not hold up for longer than a couple of hours. All I could hear
around me was the trickle of rain splashing off leaves and shrubs before
merging with the growing puddles of mud below my feet. The mud started
to coat my shoes as I try and find my way out of this forest.
As
I’m walking round trying to figure which way I entered this forest, the
clouds and rain distorting my vision. I’m sure that I’m going round in
circles, but there is no way of telling as all the trees and paths look
the same and the muddy puddles make the paths all merge into one. My
darkening wet hair slipped onto my forehead forcing more water to
trickle down my face and blur my vision more. I sweep the hair out of my
eyes, yet it still slips back in the way, hindering me in my travels.
I
carry on walking, hoping I would find my way back out of here, or at
least bump into somebody else. I remember before the rain walking past a
few hikers, carrying their large sacks and huge smiles, I wondered if
they would brace this rough English downpour still with the same smile.
The
twigs and loose roots on the floor keep attacking my feet, threating to
trip me up and making me stumble through the trees. Each time I stumble
I close my eyes and pray that I don’t fall face first into the mud, but
always manage to gain my balance. A few times I have to grab hold of a
tree, the wet bark against my skin feeling rough and cold.
Once
again I stumble on a loose root and fly thought the trees. I manage to
gain my balance by grabbing hold of a thin wispy tree, look down at my
feet I should watch where I’m going I think, then look up and notice I
had reached an opening between then trees and a muddy path, the water
trickling down the hill, almost forming the beginnings of a river.
I
look up the path and notice an old, small, stone building with a spire,
it looked abandoned. Shelter I thought and ran towards the building. As
I got closer I noticed dark ivy swarming the building and infecting the
cracks, trying to strangle and destroy this stone wonder. It was also
climbing through the gaps in the roof where the pressure of earlier
storms had force parts to concave and collapse.
I entered
through the archway where the door once hung, the remains of the wood
rotting into the ground below. Dust and cobwebs covered the air and
caught in my face tangling me in silky strings; I shook them off and
wiped my hands on my clothes, God how I hate spider webs I thought,
being more carful of where I walked.
I could hear the pounding
of the rain falling overhead, it trickled through the cracks and gaps in
the ceiling splashing on the leaves the wind had discarded here. I
stayed away from any of the open holes, not wanted to get wetter than I
already was, which at this stage was probably impossible. I tore my
soaked T-shirt away from my sodden, cold skin but it just settle and
reconnected with it, as if they were one. I gave up and blew my hair out
of my face.
Suddenly I heard a creaking from the floor above, I
looked at the hanging level, half the floor had collapsed, the
structure old and rotting. I saw one of the old wooden doors squeak open
and saw an old woman totter out peering down the huge gap in the floor.
‘Who is it?’ she peered through her squinting wrinkled eyes ‘is
that you Mary?’ She ran her bony crinkled fingers through her grey
tangled hair and squinted harder. ‘Name yourself boy!’
‘I’m
Dan,’ I looked up, feeling nervous and guilt for walking in here
uninvited. ‘I’m sorry for disturbing you. See it’s raining outside and I
thought this house was abandoned so wanted to take shelter.’
She
looked at me for a while, as if she was sizing me up, judging whether
what I said was true or not. Then she slowly tottered down a set of
stoned spiraling stairs just to the right of where she was stood. She
staggered towards me.
‘I’m sorry’ she spoke in a high pitch voice ‘I didn’t quite hear your name.’ She said lifting her ear more towards my mouth.
‘I’m
Dan’ I said slightly louder, but not loud enough so it seemed like I
was shouting and being rude. She smiled at me the chuckled slightly.
‘You must be hungry Dan.’ She slowly stumbled off to the other end of the `room, working her way around the rotting obstacles.
‘I’m ok thank you. I will just go now.’ I say loudly, hoping it would travel well enough.
‘Don’t
be silly,’ she shoed my comments off ‘You can’t go out in this.’ She
pointed to one of the larger holes in the ceiling where the most of the
water was pouring inwards. ‘I’ll cook you something up,’ She paused for
a second ‘it’s been quite a while since I’ve had a visitor.’ She
sighed.
I felt slightly sorry for her, she seemed like a lovely,
kind women and the rain outside seemed to be getting worse. I decided
to stay for a while until the rain settled a little. Maybe she will know
the way out I thought to myself.
The elderly woman opened a few
draws and cupboards, pulling out half rusted knives and pans, which
clanged together and echoed round the room. She then looked over at me
and smiled, tottering her way through the rubble. She came up close.
‘What was your name again?’ She asked kindly, I could tell that her memory was not as good as it used to be.
‘It’s
Dan.’ I said kindly, she then smiled. I looked behind her for a second
at where she had she come from, and noticed that she had not got out any
ingredients to cook with. I looked down at her petite fragile frame and
kindly asked. ‘What will you be cooking?’
She smiled at me,
almost chuckling, I wondered what about. Suddenly I felt a sharp pain in
my stomach, at first I fought it was nausea. Wondering if maybe I had
stayed out in the rain too long and caught some sort of cold that was
already turning its ugly head.
Then I noticed the pain was cold
and metallic. I looked down at the rusted small knife stuck in just
below my stomach, the darkness of my blood seeping through my t-shirt
and running down my body. At the end of the knife was the old woman’s
bony fingers.
‘Why you are!’ She cackled as she pulled the knife
out and slid it back in. I fell to my knees and she bit at my neck,
ripping away a chunk of flesh. ‘Bon appetite’ She smiled with blood and
flesh hanging from her teeth.
The pain became too much for me and blackness surround.
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Thursday, November 22, 2012
Wednesday, October 31, 2012
The Gray's House by Matt Thomas
It’s pitch black, nothing can be seen around you. You reach out to find
the wall and stumble your hands over to the switch on the light. You
panic for a few seconds unable to find it, worried about what you may
find. There are strange grinding noises coming from in front of you.
Part of you does not want to find out what they are, you want to turn
back and run away, but there that small part of you that is stronger,
its fighting back, it’s inquisitive and curious to see what is in this
house.
The creaking of the floor boards underfoot make your hear race, it fills you with terror and excitement in the same beat. You give up on finding the light switch and carefully step forward, not wanting to make much noise. You almost seem to tip toe forward.
Each time you take a step dust particles fly around, they tickle your nose and your eyes, making you feel dizzy. The small of damp contrasts to that of the dust being kicked up, it confuses your senses and makes you feel light headed, but you still continue forward.
Suddenly you remember you brought a flash light, you feel slightly embarrassed in yourself for not thinking to use it earlier to find the switch. You sigh and pull at the string round your wrist so the torch levels upward toward your hand. You grab it and turn it on, the bulb flickers and produces a thin beam of light, and it isn’t as strong as you first anticipated when choosing it.
You turn round, trying to look back at the wall you once was stumbling over, you see if there’s any sort of switch, there is nothing but torn dark wallpaper and cobwebs. You shiver and look down at your hands; they are coated in the thick webbed substance. You fiercely wipe your hands on your clothes felling a sickness in your stomach as you think of the eight legged creatures which created these webs, as you do so you let the torch drop; it catches itself with the string round your wrist, but hits you in your side winding you slightly.
You curse yourself for this action, grab at the torch again and continue to follow the direction of the wall round. ‘This place has to have a light somewhere’, you tell yourself. As you follow the wall round you start to notice dirt and grime on the wallpaper, the colour is dark, tricky to place through the lack of light your mind starts running with possibilities and it excites you a little. ‘Maybe the rumours about this house were true’ you start to recall the rumours you heard whilst still following the wall round with your poor shaft of light.
The stains start to get bigger and more defined, they worry you, you suddenly want to leave scared of finding worse, but you can’t leave yet, you haven’t found anything and if you left you knew you would forfeit the dare and therefor loose.
You started to curse Peter under your breath for making you enter this house ‘I dare you to stay in the Gray’s House’ you hear his high pitched voice and chuckle in your head and snarl, thinking of a way to get him back next time.
You suddenly notice something on the wall that stops your thoughts in their tracks. There on the wall in front of your poor shaft of light lays a set of markings, they almost look like lettering. You step up closer to get a better look.
The colour of the stained markings becomes more noticeable and darker, it’s a brownish reddened colour, and you still can’t see what the markings are so you take a few more steps forward. Then it hits you, you can see what it says and you wish you had never seen it.
On the wall scribed in this red substance were two warning words. The words ‘GET OUT’ scrolled down the wall. You get scared you panic, thinking that you had over stayed your welcome.
Suddenly the darkness is swarmed by a bright light, your eyes shocked into temporary blindness, you don’t want to open your eyelids to see who, or what just switched on the lights, and yet for some strange reason you are compelled to. You open your eyes and suddenly realise what the markings are made with.
The dark blooded hand prints trickling down the wall brought fear filled tears to your eyes, your heart sunk in your chest, you panic and turn to head for the door. You see that stood at the door was a tall shadowed figure with piercing pale eyes. Fear builds up inside you as the figure is suddenly standing in front of you, still covered in shadows, a few large noticeable scars and those wild piercing eyes. The shadow grabes you by the throat, you struggle and tears escape your eyes, wishing you had stayed at home.
The figure throws you against the wall, you hit it with force. As you hit the wall a shooting pain spirals down your side. His voice then booms across the room towards you, it makes you freeze on the spot and fills your throat with panic and fear.
‘Welcome to my house’ he cackles. ‘We are going to have so much fun.’
The creaking of the floor boards underfoot make your hear race, it fills you with terror and excitement in the same beat. You give up on finding the light switch and carefully step forward, not wanting to make much noise. You almost seem to tip toe forward.
Each time you take a step dust particles fly around, they tickle your nose and your eyes, making you feel dizzy. The small of damp contrasts to that of the dust being kicked up, it confuses your senses and makes you feel light headed, but you still continue forward.
Suddenly you remember you brought a flash light, you feel slightly embarrassed in yourself for not thinking to use it earlier to find the switch. You sigh and pull at the string round your wrist so the torch levels upward toward your hand. You grab it and turn it on, the bulb flickers and produces a thin beam of light, and it isn’t as strong as you first anticipated when choosing it.
You turn round, trying to look back at the wall you once was stumbling over, you see if there’s any sort of switch, there is nothing but torn dark wallpaper and cobwebs. You shiver and look down at your hands; they are coated in the thick webbed substance. You fiercely wipe your hands on your clothes felling a sickness in your stomach as you think of the eight legged creatures which created these webs, as you do so you let the torch drop; it catches itself with the string round your wrist, but hits you in your side winding you slightly.
You curse yourself for this action, grab at the torch again and continue to follow the direction of the wall round. ‘This place has to have a light somewhere’, you tell yourself. As you follow the wall round you start to notice dirt and grime on the wallpaper, the colour is dark, tricky to place through the lack of light your mind starts running with possibilities and it excites you a little. ‘Maybe the rumours about this house were true’ you start to recall the rumours you heard whilst still following the wall round with your poor shaft of light.
The stains start to get bigger and more defined, they worry you, you suddenly want to leave scared of finding worse, but you can’t leave yet, you haven’t found anything and if you left you knew you would forfeit the dare and therefor loose.
You started to curse Peter under your breath for making you enter this house ‘I dare you to stay in the Gray’s House’ you hear his high pitched voice and chuckle in your head and snarl, thinking of a way to get him back next time.
You suddenly notice something on the wall that stops your thoughts in their tracks. There on the wall in front of your poor shaft of light lays a set of markings, they almost look like lettering. You step up closer to get a better look.
The colour of the stained markings becomes more noticeable and darker, it’s a brownish reddened colour, and you still can’t see what the markings are so you take a few more steps forward. Then it hits you, you can see what it says and you wish you had never seen it.
On the wall scribed in this red substance were two warning words. The words ‘GET OUT’ scrolled down the wall. You get scared you panic, thinking that you had over stayed your welcome.
Suddenly the darkness is swarmed by a bright light, your eyes shocked into temporary blindness, you don’t want to open your eyelids to see who, or what just switched on the lights, and yet for some strange reason you are compelled to. You open your eyes and suddenly realise what the markings are made with.
The dark blooded hand prints trickling down the wall brought fear filled tears to your eyes, your heart sunk in your chest, you panic and turn to head for the door. You see that stood at the door was a tall shadowed figure with piercing pale eyes. Fear builds up inside you as the figure is suddenly standing in front of you, still covered in shadows, a few large noticeable scars and those wild piercing eyes. The shadow grabes you by the throat, you struggle and tears escape your eyes, wishing you had stayed at home.
The figure throws you against the wall, you hit it with force. As you hit the wall a shooting pain spirals down your side. His voice then booms across the room towards you, it makes you freeze on the spot and fills your throat with panic and fear.
‘Welcome to my house’ he cackles. ‘We are going to have so much fun.’
Monday, October 29, 2012
The Two Suited Men by Matt Thomas
As two teenage boys sat on the
front porch of a house, a car with tinted windows pulls up. The doors open, and
two men in black suits get out and start walking towards them.
The boy on the left looked at
the other boy, wondering what these two men wanted. As they came closer both
boys looked at each other, they take a slight gulp of air and sigh nervously.
The two men reach the house,
they are both wearing black shades, even though the sky’s dull and cloudy; the
air is close and thick. They stop by the steps of the porch and in
synchronisation both take off their sunglasses.
The man on the left seemed to be
slightly older, shorter and a little bit more worn than the other, but except
from this they almost looked identical.
The slightly older man spoke
first.
‘Which one of you is Harry?’ He asked,
glancing between the two boys looking for signs of weakness. One of the boys
stood. He had dark brown hair, was very tall and slim, yet thought he was tough
and strong.
‘Who’s asking?’ He demanded as
the other, blonde haired boy, sat, watched and wondered.
‘I’ll take it you’re Harry then,
shall I?’ The younger man said, stepping forward onto the first porch step. As
soon as he did so the brown haired teenager took a nervous step backwards.
Making him trip and almost stumbled back into his wicker chair.
The other boy, who had been
quietly watching, gulped and took a step forward and out of his chair. He
headed towards the suited men and placed out his hand.
‘Harry Foster,’ he announced
with his clammy palm out-reached ‘How can I help you?’
Both men looked down at the
feeble peace offering and sneered, rejecting all gratitude. Harry awkwardly
dropped his hand back down to his side, then changed his mind and placed both
his hands in the pockets of his brown leather jacket.
‘We need to talk to you alone.’
The older man demanded and looked across at Harry’s brown haired friend as he
stumbled towards the group and interrupted.
‘Nobody talks to Harry without
me.’ He paused. ‘I mean we don’t even know who you are.’ He looks at Harry for
support. Then back at the two men. The younger, suited man looked angry and was
about to take another step forward but the older man held him back. Harry then
interrupted.
‘I’m sorry guys, but my friend
here is right. My mum would go mental if she found out I was talking to
strangers.’
Both black suited men looked at
him simultaneously. The older man cleared his throat and spoke.
‘I’m DCI Mills and this is my
partner DI Jones. We have come to ask you a few questions.’
Harry’s friend looked out the
two officers, wary of what they were saying.
‘If you are officers, shouldn’t
you be wearing uniforms?’ He questioned them. Both harry and his friend looked
at each other, Harry nodded and looked back.
‘Patrick’s right’ He grinned. ‘Surely
you would show us your badges from the start.’
The two men looked at each other
and sighed. They both instantaneously reached into apposing pockets, which were
inside their black jackets.
‘We didn’t want to do this.’ The
younger man said and, in sync, both men pulled out revolvers and pointed them
at the two boys.
Both boys stepped back in shock,
raised their sweaty arms slightly, wishing they had never questioned the two
suited men as much. They both looked at each other in terror. Patrick was about
to open his mouth to question the men again but Harry glared at him. Patrick
instantly closed his mouth again.
‘Get in the car.’ The older man
ordered. ‘We have something to show you.’
Both of the boys unwillingly
walked to the car whilst the men pressed the barrels of their guns into the
back of the teenagers’ neck. He boys opened the doors of the car and climbed
in.
The doors slammed behind them
and the men got into the front. The younger man pointed his gun at the two boys
as the older man started the car.
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